Task 3: Paraphrasing

 

“Without clear lines of communication, our ideas would stay within our own

small development teams instead of becoming mature products. While this is

obvious to those of us who have become experienced engineers, the real

question is: Why is it lost to us when we are engineering students?”

Dr. Akbar R Khan, Software Systems Engineer, USA,

“Good Communication Is Essential...” (2014)


 According to Dr. Akbar R Khan, 2014

Its vital for engineering students to understand the importance of communication; without it, ideation will be stagnant within small teams and not come into fruition. Experienced engineers understand this.

Comments

  1. It is possible use a full-stop instead of a ";" to shorten the sentence.

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  2. According to Dr. Akbar R Khan Software Systems Engineer, USA, 2014 should be placed infront of the direct quotes

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  3. Try not to quote a large sentence or paragraph. Take only key points.

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  4. Good day,

    I think it would be better to use it is or it's, instead of its.

    Thank you for paraphrasing.

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