Self Introduction
Dear Professor Blackstone,
I hope you are doing well. My name is Amirul, and I am
writing to introduce myself to you as a student of your communications class
(T3).
I graduated with a diploma in mechanical engineering from
Ngee Ann Polytechnic. Following that, I self-learnt programming during my NS
stint, which led me to enrol into the specialist diploma in information systems
development program after I completed NS.
While doing so, I was employed as a junior developer in Accenture,
an IT consulting company, for almost two years. During this time, I realized I
still love the hands-on aspect of engineering. As it would be beneficial to
combine my knowledge in software and hardware engineering, I then left my job to
join mechanical engineering in SIT, planning to specialize in mechatronics.
One of my strengths is that I enjoy speaking to people. I find their personalities and stories fascinating, a trait I discovered when I was a student ambassador in polytechnic. This experience was instrumental in developing the quality of my social interactions. My wife and friends call me a “natural cheerleader” and a social butterfly, as people find no difficulty being at ease in my presence.
Unfortunately, I do face challenges in professional settings
such as interviews. I can connect with the interviewer but can’t figure out how to piece my thoughts properly when making an argument or sharing
about my strengths and weaknesses. The conversation often lacks flow.
I would like to have a clearer mind and improve my thought
process, so I can communicate in an effective and efficient way.
Incidentally, I love learning new things, be it getting to
know someone, a new hobby or a skill. Recently I enrolled myself into a
python programming course as this would be useful in my endeavor to become a
robotics engineer.
As an individual, I believe I stand out among the crowd as
someone who is not afraid to speak up. Working during the pandemic has pushed
me in terms of being a professional and one of the by-products of that is an
improvement in my communication skills.
I am truly looking forward to this module, and I hope I can
be an effective communicator in your class.
Sincerely,
Amirul Ahmad
[Edited on 23/1/22]
[Commented on the following blogs:
- Benjamin
- Jia Xin
- Valencia
- Wen Jue
- Peerasak
Hi Amirul! It is good to know how much interest you have in engineering. I too hope that I am as sociable as you are. Anyways I think that your sentence structures and grammar in the letter is great, just that you may want to reduce the number of paragraphs in your letter. Keep up the good work !
ReplyDeleteWen Jue, oh man thank you so much! I really appreciate the compliments!
DeleteHi Amirul! Nice introduction letter. You have shown you interest in engineering. It is complete.
ReplyDeleteOne minor thing that you can consider changing is at 2nd paragraph, "As it would be beneficial to combine my knowledge in software and hardware engineering, I then left my job to join mechanical engineering in SIT, planning to specialize in mechatronics."
I think you can change that to "As it would be beneficial to combine my knowledge in software and hardware engineering, I left my job shortly after to join mechanical engineering in SIT and have plan to specialize in mechatronics."
The word 'then' does not sound nice in the letter. Other than that, all is good. Hope this comment helps you. Keep up the good work, Amirul.
Hi Val, thank you so much for the feedback! I do agree, that change does sound nicer. Ill make the change now!
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ReplyDeleteHello Amirul,
Thank you for this expressive letter. I felt you have covered the basic scope of the assignment and managed to demonstrate something about what makes you unique.
You have also explained your points fully and provided ample illustration!
It was a pleasure reading your introduction letter, to get to know you better. It was interesting to about your experiences. Looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future!
Warmest regards,
Jia Xin
Hi Jia Xin, thank you so much for reading my letter! I hope you enjoyed it. Looking forward to seeing your work too!
DeleteHey there Amirul! Your introduction letter is really well written, espacially how you added in what the currently on-going pandemic has affected your lifestyle. For the interview section, its natural for people unable to come up with words when the question is far off from your experience. During that time you can ask the interviewer to give you some time to gather thoughts and answer the question in one go. With enough practice and preparation, I'm sure your interviews will go very smoothly!
ReplyDeleteHi Peerasak, thank you so much for the advice. Ive learnt that some interviewers do appreciate candidates asking for a bit of time to formulate their thoughts. I personally think it leaves the impression that the candidates are genuine and do not give 'textbook' answers.
DeleteThank you for the reminder, I'll definitely take not of that!
Hi Amirul,
ReplyDeleteGreat introduction, after reading it I've managed to know a lot more about you. Very detailed explanation and I love your strength where you stated that people find no difficulty being at ease around you. One minor thing is, you may consider not splitting them into so many paragraphs. Overall, I enjoyed reading your introduction letter.
Thank you for writing and keep inspiring!
Hey Ben, thank you so much for the feedback! I do agree, it does seem a bit lengthy. I shall make that change now!
DeleteDear Amirul,
ReplyDeleteThank you for this clearly articulated and informative letter. You do a fine job covering the scope of the assignment while detailing your educational background, self learning and work experience then connecting these to your interests and communication skills. It's obvious in your description (and in your demeanor in class) that you have gained the sort of experience and knowledge that your classmates would benefit from hearing about. I can understand why some may people see you as a bit of a 'cheerleader' and 'social butterfly.' Let's add 'leader' to that list. (By the way, you mention that you are married. Is 'parent' another one of your roles?)
This reflection also flows well and is accurate in terms of language use. It's reall a pleasure to read.
I look forward to more of your contributions to the class this term.
Best wishes,
Brad
Hi Professor Blackstone! Thank you so much for your kind words. I hope to do well and learn from not only you, but from my peers in class as well. Im glad that you enjoyed reading my letter!
Deleteps. no im not a parent! Hopefully we can eventually become one after I graduate hahaha.